-asleep during the day
Outline :
Thesis sentence : Unfortunately,insomnia has several negative effects,such as concentrate,relationship
and nervous system activity.
BODY1:
T.s:The first effect is concentrate problems.
SS1:When people have insomnia problem,they can face to face bad concentrate during the day and
they can’t clear think anything.
Ex:For example,imagine that a student who has sleeping disorder,during the exam he/she can’t
answer the questions simply and may not decide to correct answer.
SS2:Moreover,at the time of working or studying,people who have insomnia maybe can’t awake most
of the time and he/she may sleep the different terms of the day.
Ex:Researchers said that most of American people sleep during the working.It means sleeping
disorder is big problem and affect our life badly.
BODY2:
T.s:The second result is relationship problems with people.
SS1:Sleeping disorder often affect our daily life such as bad communication with our friends.
Ex:I would like to give an example in my life.When I was in high school I have a big problem
about sleeping and mostf of the time I can’t sleep at night so the following day I argued some of my
friends so sleeping disorder damages my relationship.
SS2:Furthermore,because of sleeping disorder many people have irritable mood.It means insomnia
bring out bad psychologyPeople may have bizarre behaviour.
BODY3:
T.s: The third and the last effect is nervous system activity.
SS1:Human body needs enough sleeping to produce cell because at the time of sleeping our body
produce cells so sleeping disorder affects humans bodies badly.Therefore,the system of nervous
affected by sleeping disorder.
Conclusion:As you can see,there are many negative effects of insomnia such as can’t clear
thinking,irritable mood and so on.In my opinion,sleeping disorder is bare of our all of negative
situations such as unsuccession.I think,the people who have insomnia should ask help for the solution
of sleeping disorder.
Kategoriler:
0 comments:
Post a Comment